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PostSubject: Beautiful or balls??   Sun 15 Aug 2010, 23:48

These are some poems I wrote cuz I were so bored on the road XD What do you think? Pls constructive Criticism xD

As fluid and flowing as the waterfalls of high mountains,
as unstoppable and scary as the time passing,
as sweet and feiry as the roses of thorns,
and as stunning and beautiful like the dreams you exist in,
You, are a force to be reckoned with.



I am the moon,
You are the sun
You are bright and shiny,
I am just a shadow,
You wear a constant smile, and bring happiness,
I am forever dark,
until I see you and you meet my gaze, for only then,
I smile, and shine, for the honour of you.


The chants of fate reaches my ears,
fills me with inner fears,
of what sacrifice or suffice I may meet on the way to my duty,
to unravel the mask of my mate,
to see its inner beauty,
or the marks of impurity.


the fog and mist that clouds my mind,
is tainting any thought it can find,
to drain my very essence,
for its own divine,
Save me, from this curse of mine,
And I will forever be,
your pensive guardian.


The world is so dull, so null, I don't dare.
So black and white.
But when you have someone you care for, to be full, dare to ignite.
The world is beautiful


I wish you could be here to light up my road, heart body and mind,
from any unwanted load of fear, unclear, hate or any of that kind.


Madness is lurking, together with this curse.
I try to run away,
but desolation is at every corner,
a sip of wine, is another line of quarantine.
This disease of mind,
is making me strive,
fleeing from solitude and despair.
Come here fast, for you are the cure,
for this curse of one kind.
You shall make me pure, and safe at last,
from the hauntings of my past.


The pink sakura blossoms invades the air and eyes,
the beauty captivates and makes you an addict to its mask of sweetness.
The moon invades the night,
fills it with luminous and mysterious lights of its own,
captivates you in one eyeshot,
and forcing you to hold your eyes,
until it lets you go.
I wonder who could have the same effects...


The two bulls of black and white,
shall rise again,
one is wise, the other evil, one fights for demise, the other, for good,
one lies, the other speaks nothing but the truth,
one is disguised, the other not,
one is decieving, the other not,
what would you choose?
Light or blight?
Would you know what you have chosen, if one said
"I am not evil. Choose me." and the other "He is evil, I am the good one."
What would you choose?
Black or white?
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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Mon 16 Aug 2010, 00:24

i hate such things. always reminds me of something when i read this, and it just did again... but you did a good job its really nice.

and now i ask you: is that just written without any truth content or is it how u feel. tell me.

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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Mon 16 Aug 2010, 00:41

Hey good poems even though i read only one cuz poems bore me to DEATH Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Mon 16 Aug 2010, 01:49

i remember once in school german teacher wanted everyone to write a poem about love lmfao. and it was really important to her, she said like "if u dont, then..." lol.

then omfg we did something like a circle, and everyone read out the poems even the guys i had a need to laugh but i suppressed it. then it was me, but i hadnt done one and the teacher goin insane she punished me with a lot of exercises, but at least at the end of the day i didnt became a noob. cheers
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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Mon 16 Aug 2010, 01:55

xae wrote:
but at least at the end of the day i didnt became a noob. cheers
Nice
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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Mon 16 Aug 2010, 02:00

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The pink sakura blossoms invades the air and eyes,
the beauty captivates and makes you an addict to its mask of sweetness.
The moon invades the night,
fills it with luminous and mysterious lights of its own,
captivates you in one eyeshot,
and forcing you to hold your eyes,
until it lets you go.
I wonder who could have the same effects...

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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Mon 16 Aug 2010, 02:30

here omg now my turn with a poem its called half past one, because i post it at half past one.

all day u had me thinking, uhh anticipating
u told me that tonight was my night
and now u got me feeling so right
love the way your body, it's feeling up against me
u make me create fantasies in my head, im looking at the clock and its

half past one, and the lovin just began
we can go nights long, keep loving me on top of me
Its half past one, we can ride till we breakdown
do it all night long
keep loving me on top of me.



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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Mon 16 Aug 2010, 02:34

is it speaking of nina? Razz maybe another one? Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Mon 16 Aug 2010, 02:41

now meeeeeeeee

vader

he walks amongst us
but hes is none of us

hes a killa
and drinks tequilla

tonite hes gonna visit you
to listen to blink 182

epic lol
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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Mon 16 Aug 2010, 02:45

Trqr wrote:
is it speaking of nina? Razz maybe another one? Razz

!!!!!

looooooooooooooool omg TRAQ u made laugh like shit i broke down xDDDDDD

lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol! lol!

zogmg cant stopl laughing xDDDDD

nina omg traq!!! dwarf

NO XD

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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Mon 16 Aug 2010, 03:16

i like xaes poem Razz thats the one you should have read to your german teacher Very Happy . i would dp a poem but it would be something stupid
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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Mon 16 Aug 2010, 10:13

Ehm lol cool what is nina :O? and well i donno i just wrote it down Razz Maybe i feel some of it but i dont feel it all Razz Its not like im goin ccrazy auyauaw xD
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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Mon 16 Aug 2010, 15:19

most beautiful poem ever (most beautiful in english anyway)

If you want to tuch the sky
Fuck a duck, and try to fly.



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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Mon 16 Aug 2010, 16:15

lmao traq yea should have tried that XD
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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Mon 16 Aug 2010, 20:27

nice RaawR, deep. Well Black Razz but Traq wrote was deeper xD
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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Tue 17 Aug 2010, 01:45

RaawR wrote:
Ehm lol cool what is nina :O?

a name? XD

looong ago rofl Wink

but traq i remember one story mate. with a girl at the door and playing gw? u remember that? Laughing



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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Tue 17 Aug 2010, 01:57

ok man im bored i will tell now XD

i dunno if i remember everything correctly so u can correct me traq (or add something)

ye how to start. traq and me were playing guild wars, long time ago i think more than 1 year. then suddenly he said brb, i was waiting in game he came back after some secs. omg wtf has he done in 30 secs, then he says something like "a girl was at my door she said that she loves me". i asked him and now? he said "i dont love her"

3 secs after we go on questing in GW omg Traq hahahahaha what a playboy Laughing

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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Tue 17 Aug 2010, 02:03

I think Traqs poem was the best of all.
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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Tue 17 Aug 2010, 15:03

aaaaaaaaaa ye i remember that! ye it was loong time ago xD it was funnyshe came with her friend cause she was too shiny (timid Razz) and then her friend left us alone and she started to say that she wanted to be my girl-friend Razz it toke me long time to say her that i didn't want to xD and she said me things like "then why did u kiss me one week ago" i answered "cause i wanted to kiss you at this moment " xD and she said me "i would like u to kiss me now" and i answered "i don't want to" lol Razz

really old storry make two years or near Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Tue 17 Aug 2010, 15:13

looooooool hahahaha Razz

come on if she was hot you would have taken her, so i think she wasnt beautiful? Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Tue 17 Aug 2010, 15:16

bah she was little beautiful but not enough for me Razz muhahahaha no she was uhm just correct Razz but that's all Razz she wasn't " omfg what happen my heart is playing drum what the fuck this girl is so beautiful that i would like to ******* her with a ****** in her ***** behind the ********* in the position of ****** " she was just normal Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Tue 17 Aug 2010, 15:20

ahahaha XD

a picture wanna see a picture! Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Tue 17 Aug 2010, 15:21

LoL i don't have picture Razz aaa i search if she's on facebook Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Tue 17 Aug 2010, 15:22

i hope u find! Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Beautiful or balls??   Tue 17 Aug 2010, 15:26

i don't remember her surname :X but i tried to find her facebook in her best friend's friends in facebook but she's not in :X i think se doesn't have it Razz or that she broke all link she had with cherbourg since her mother died :X

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